2024年5月18日发(作者：奥特曼传奇英雄破解版)

论文评语（Thesis comment）

Preliminary comment:

The thesis is basically consistent with the content of the

thesis, the structure is basically complete, the language is

relatively smooth, and there is no major grammatical error. The

problem is that there are too many parts quoted in the full text

and too little analysis. Some of the "analysis" have traces of

plagiarism, too theoretical and not practical. It should be

said that the materials needed to complete this paper are

already available. You can analyze and summarize the material

on this basis to draw your own conclusions. Note that the

doctrine of "bringing" should be your own, not scissors + batter,

no references

Two draft comments:

Based on an improved release, with some unnecessary paragraphs,

prepare some chapters of the title, modify some mistakes,

errors in the reference has been corrected.

The new amendments include the first sentence of the abstract,

the replacement of keywords, the life of Jack London, and the

"Superman" embodied in his works The, Call, of, the, Wild, which

should be further explained. Part of the confusion in temporal

usage needs to be corrected. There are too many references and

too few comments. Some references are not mentioned in the text

at all. It is a problem that is not easy to solve. It is suggested

that London is the so-called Superman, and Buck is also the

angle of the super dog to illustrate the connection between the

two and the influence of the author's life on his work.

Final comment

The thesis is basically in line with the content of the thesis.

The structure is complete and the language is fluent. Or in the

draft in addition to subsection also found no much meticulous,

serious grammatical or spelling mistakes. The author tries to

find out the connection between a writer and someone in his

novel from the life of Jack London. From the point of view, a

better understanding of the original author, also collected the

relevant data, but only the information listed, how to draw

their own conclusions by analyzing the data, this is the writing

purpose, but at this point, the author's work is not enough.

[case two]

Preliminary comment:

The content of this thesis has a certain guiding significance

for the settlement of cultural conflicts in transnational

corporations. The discussion is more thorough and the

organization is clear. In the contrast between eastern and

Western cultures, the authors cite a number of interesting

examples, but few are present in china. The examples of Oriental

culture are mostly from Japanese culture, which is a major flaw.

The level of share too is another drawback, almost a paragraph

one, if not carefully look more confusing. There are a lot of

mistakes in print formats, spelling, and words, especially in

the latter half of the paper. The reference section is short

of publishing sites.

Two draft comments:

There is a great improvement on the basis of the draft. The main

problems have been solved. Especially in the draft, the

layering is too thin and the Chinese cultural examples are not

enough. Language errors have been corrected a lot, but there

are still errors that haven't been corrected, such as course

and cause. There are also minor problems with the arrangement

of references. The introduction is still missing from the

source.

Final comment:

The structure of the thesis is complete and the parts are in

line with the writing standards of English papers. The author

attempts to analyze the cultural conflicts in transnational

corporations from the perspective of cultural differences

between East and West, and look for ways to solve them. In order

to write this paper, the author clearly consulted a large amount

of data, discussed more fully and organized clearly.

Unfortunately, due to the author no multinational company

working experience, did not go to multinational companies for

the corresponding study, therefore, only her discourse

second-hand data obtained on the basis of reading, and the

so-called oriental culture and in Japan as the representative

of the data, to solve more problems of cultural conflict about

transnational corporations in China the reader need is the

comparison between Chinese and Western culture, the author

although after each release added, is still insufficient.

[case three]

Preliminary comment:

The selected topic of the thesis is very good and creative. The

author has studied both the psychological theory of Maslow and

the original works of Jack and London. The main problems are

as follows: 1: do not understand the format of English papers;

Introduction is partly a chart and a section. There is no

conclusion at the end of the thesis and the arrangement of

reference is not standard; 2: the mistake of view is that the

theory of human psychology should be applied to animals. In fact,

the dog in Jack's London works is personified to some extent,

the superman who embodies the will of power, or super dog. In

addition, there are some mistakes in grammar.

Two draft comments:

On the basis of the first draft, the author made a careful

revision. The paper has greatly improved from content to form.

Two streams of text downloaded from the web have been deleted.

Part of the preamble has been moved to the text as required.

The conclusion has been added, although the content has yet to

be enriched. The reference section has been rearranged, but

there are still irregularities.

Final comment:

The selected topic of the thesis is very good and creative. It

is understood that the author is in Business English learning

contact Maslow psychological theory. And the first time to read

the Jack London The Call of the Wild is in the sophomore year

of English reading class. In order to write this paper, the

author has done some research, especially the original work of

Jack London. It is not difficult to see from the author's

citation of the original book that she is quite familiar with

the content of the original. The author's writing attitude is

serious, research and writing plan according to the demand of

the school and make a report in writing in progress in stages

to complete the thesis. As for the mistakes in the first draft

from form to content, once pointed out, the author can take it

seriously and revise it again and again. Although the language

is still a little immature, but the paper is clear, full of

reasoning, the idea of originality, there is a certain

reference value, can be regarded as a good article.