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读后续写 人与动物类 （推轮椅募捐救犬）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Here is a secret that everyone knows: I don't like to ask for help. Of course, my

disability means that I need assistance when I get dressed and have to be driven

everywhere, but that is precisely my point.

One night a few years ago, after my caregiver helped me to bed, I enjoyed my favorite

part of my routine—playing with my service dog Marshall. When the rest of the world

made me feel “lacking", Marshall made me feel like "enough".

As usual, he jumped off the bed after a few minutes, but the pain in his eyes told me

something was wrong. A few days later, a trip to the vet confirmed my worst fears. Dr Tom

said, "I must perform an operation to treat him” "Is he in pain?” I held my breath. Then I

got the answer "Yes."

l felt heartbroken. I couldn't remember talking about the details. I had one huge

question: "How much would the operation cost?” "“About $2,500. It might as well have

been a million.” I couldn't afford it. Each day, I searched for ways to raise money for this

operation.

A beautiful bike trail was close to the apartment where we lived. On most of the days

of our eight years together Marshall and I used it. 1 loved the trees, the fresh air and being

outside. Over the years, many of the neighbors got familiar with us. Everyone loved

Marshall.

Then one day, an idea occurred to me. Could I ask these people to contribute to the

cost of Marshall's operation? If I could push my wheelchair a certain number of laps(圈)

and get money for every lap that I pleted, might I raise enough money for Marshall to have

his operation? Our regular route was a mile and a half long. My goal was to push my

wheelchair ten laps, a total of fifteen miles. Next, feeling very bold and a little nervous, I

set a date. Then I made posters and posted them around my apartment and all over the bike

trail. My neighbors were concerned for Marshall.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

With hope, I started to train myself.

一、分析原文

本文讲述了身患残疾的作者并不喜欢寻求帮助，然而当“我”的服务犬

Marshall

患眼疾需要一大笔钱做手术时，我因囊中羞涩，只能求助他人。我想到一个主意推着

轮椅走

10

圈约

15

英里为

Marshall

筹钱。我制作了海报贴在公寓周围以及旁边的自行

车道上。邻居们都很关心

Marshall

。

二、续写视角

第一人称

三、续写主题 人与动物 （挑战自身极限，成功筹款救动物）

四、

续写情节构建

1. 由第一段首句内容“带着希望，我开始训练自己。” 可知，关键词train myself。第

一段可描写作者战胜疼痛刻苦训练。训练—疼痛—战胜疼痛—成功

2.

由第二段首句内容

“

重要的一天终于来了，我在早上

6:30

出门。

”

可知，关键词

The

big day

。第二段可描写作者成功跑完了

15

英里，为服务犬

Marshall

的手术筹集了足

够的资金。开始艰难地推轮椅

—

众人捐款成功地筹到了手术费

3.

续写线索：刻苦训练

——

感到疼痛、产生畏难情绪

——

战胜自己

——

出发推轮椅

——

众人捐款

——

筹款成功，狗狗得以手术

五、官方范文

With hope, I started to train myself. For the first few days, I nearly gave up. Pushing

my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love for

Marshall kept me going. Instead of listening to my body, I focused on the voice in my heart.

When I was training, I thought to myself. “One more lap. You can do this. Don’t stop.

Marshall needs you.” After weeks of daily training, I could finish all fifteen miles.

The big day finally came and I went out at 6: The first few laps were long

and lonely. Slowly the donors and neighbors came to watch. Some even cheered as I

passed them. With every mile, more people came and donated money. There was hope after

all. Donations from the neighbors continued. Many hours passed, and I finished all fifteen

miles. I succeeded in raising enough money for Marshall’s operation. I could never have

made it without these kind people’s support.

六 精彩片段描写

场景1: 刻苦训练

Pushing the wheelchair many laps required a lot of strength training day after day.

Obviously, it was extremely difficult for a disabled person who lacked exercise for a long

time.

场景2:战胜自我

1）However, once I thought of the pain my dog suffered, courage and strength found its

way back. After weeks of daily training, I could finish all fifteen miles.

2）With pain and tiredness, sometimes I wanted to give up, but thinking of Marshall’s

painful eyes, I was determined to continue my training.

3）Pushing my wheelchair made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders, but my love

for Marshall kept me going.

场景3: 上路筹款

1）The usually quiet bike trail was full of people, with my neighbors and friends lining on

both sides. Never in my wildest dreams had I imagined that all my neighbors and strangers

cheered for my bravery and expressed their genuine wishes to my dog.

2）

It was a sunny day with birds singing and flying all around. I breathed in the fresh air

and reached the bike trail, surprisedly finding that there were dozens of people.

场景四：筹款成功

1）With a warm current welling up in my mind, I gathered up all my strength to push the

wheel chair. Hardly had I seen the finishing line when tears rushed down my face.

Eventually I raised enough money for the operation. At that moment I felt all my hard

training was worth it.

2）With so many people focusing on me, my heart was pounding wildly and hands were

sweating. After posing myself, I began to push my wheelchair slowly but powerfully. With

my perseverance, I eventually succeeded and raised enough money to pay for the operation.

At that moment I realized that asking for help was not a sign of weakness, but proof of

courage and determination.

3）With people gathering and their eyes looking at me, my heart was pounding so wildly

that my throat tightened and my hands were sweating. But eventually I ignored my

uneasiness and began my challenge. Each time I pleted a lap, the crowd burst into

thunderous applause.